Her, who is she?

  male
neanderthaler | 17 Mar 2008 - 12:50pm

Somehow something changed
Changed by her
Her, who is she?

She is someone
Someone relaxing and calming
Calming like the sea
Seawater so gently
Gently brushing our legs
Legs just walking further
Further into the sea
Sea, soft and Pure
Pure she is for sure
Sure I like her
Her, who is she?

She is someone sweet and caring
caring like a mother over a child
child, is she still
Still so tender and innocent
Innocence fading slowly
slowly making space for love
Love taking over her actions
Actions that make it nice
Nice that I can be with her
Her, who is she?

She is someone you don't know
Knowing Her is a priviledge for me
Me? Yes I know her

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femalemissis | 17 March 2008 - 1:57pm

Nice poem. She sound so mysterious.


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femalelovely_app | 17 March 2008 - 6:40pm

wow!! I liked it Smile


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femaleMaria May | 25 April 2008 - 4:51pm

Smile

femalekerriejane | 29 April 2008 - 9:07am

great poem, so mysterious Smile

femaleCaiti-didnt | 23 May 2008 - 3:24am

Oh, wow, I loved this! It's beautiful. Whoever she is, she sounds amazing. I would keep her to myself too. I'm selfish like that.


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femaleCaiti-didnt | 23 May 2008 - 3:24am

Oh, wow, I loved this! It's beautiful. Whoever she is, she sounds amazing. I would keep her to myself too. I'm selfish like that.


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"To be misunderstood, is to be great," Henry David Thoreau